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I like how this group included a visual example to support their ideas.
I like how they connected school subjects that wouldn't necessarily go together.
The visual stimulus used by the group was rather entertaining, and I must say I enjoyed it! They spoke clearly and connected many ideas that I would have never thought of.
I love starting with the video of the Nutcracker; it really captured my attention.
~You also seemed to be a little unsure of your presentation and what was next.~Lauren, you seemed to stumble over your words some, but you had great ideas.~The dress could have been more formal.~You made a great example of the scientist in education. I really liked that!~Neely, you were reading off the screen. If you had practiced a little more, you could have come off more confident.
They seem to be slight off with their slides and their speaking, but I really enjoy the continuing theme with the balet dancers
The presentation overall was pretty good. It could have flowed better with the script and preparation but the content was pretty solid and captivating. I think that the video was a little bit too long but would have been more effective if it was shortened. The point would have been stronger.
I like how they incorporated symphony into buisness, it was rather interesting and made the presentation a lot better.
-Good example in the video clip of the ballet, although you maybe should have talked about it more since it was such a long clip-Good job speaking up-Maybe could have correlated the dressing up more, the outfits don't match one another-Shouldn't turn around and look at the screen-Shouldn't sit down during the presentation
Sometimes you guys rambled, but you got your point across. I really liked how you started off with the ballet, then ended with it. It really helped that "symphony" piece. You guys spoke pretty clearly and loud enough for us to hear. Nice job.
The presentation needed to be rehearsed more- group effort was hardly shone. The video was a great example, but it was easy to loose interest quickly. The ideas were great and fulfilling, but needed to be slightly shortened to keep the audiences attention.
The progression of education to business helped to explain the importance of symphony throughout life.
I liked the video of the play, that really added to the theme of symphony. The one thing I would recommend is a little bit more rehearsing. Overall, the presentation was very good.
This presentation was very well explained. I think the only thing that would have helped would have been to make sure they had all their lines down a little better. Other than that, I really liked the video and how it connected.
I really enjoyed how you started with the nutcracker, just make sure your overall presentation is well rehearsed!
Good job using examplesGood job speaking upVery well explained
I really like the video and how you connected it to Symphony. You all did really well talking loudly and explaining.